My Pet Peeve Essay

                                          Dora Perez

                                        Core 2

I really dislike when people ask if your ok when you're obviously not.For example when you fall because you're clumsy. Or when your crying when something has happened to you. Or when you're mad and you seem really upset. These are all times i have experienced and i am going to tell you why being asked if your ok when you're obviously not bothers me so much.

My first story is when you fall such as when i got tripped and all people did was laugh for about a minute before asking if i was ok.Well my reason for being mad then was that my friend tripped me and she just laughed along with other people. well if they saw me fall why not just assume that i'm not ok because i got tripped and because people are laughing at me. Or why not assume that im ok because im not crying or because i'm not screaming that im hurt.My second story for falling is when im really tired and i fall just like that.Well if my friends were listening when i told them that i was tired and really dizzy well they would know why i fell instead of saying why did you fall or are you ok well if they were paying attention they would know if im ok or not and why i fell.

Well my third story is when you cry such as when i cried when i found out i was going to have a sister. i cried because i thought all the attention was going to be for her but it turns out shes not that bad. well anyway my reason for being mad is that i am upset because i'm having a sister and i just found out the month shes due.well the good reason is that well she'll be my first sister and two that i love reading to little kids so ill be able to read to her.well another time i cried was when i  got glass in my bookbag by someone i never found out and it cut me really bad. i cried because my friends mom was healing it and she put a lotion on it and it hurt really bad. i didn't let them see me cry and i didn't want them to so i went into the bathroom.well my reasons there ar that my friend saw me bleeding and get cut so why not assume that i'm not ok. well also she didn't see me cry (because i went into the bathroom) so why not assume that i'm ok.

Well my final story is when your really mad or upset and you don’t feel like talking. Well this happened to me just one week ago. So that day i was really mad because i had just spilled juice on my favorite top.